The form and content of legislations passed by various common law jurisdictions are freely available online. Please consult them.
I understand that Johnny Fok, a former solicitor, is involved in the preparation of the draft. Johnny will be well-served by going through those examples. I hope that Johnny will not feel offended by what I said. There is no shame over self-improvements.
I am truly worried that the draft in this state would severely impede HKP’s credibility in the international community.
Please pay special attention to my advice on excessive wordings and paragraphs of explanations and elaboration. They do not belong in a piece of legislation.
I have no other intentions but to help in this most honourable endeavour.
